A couple thoughts:
This might be a bit more descriptive if it was changed from "Earlybird, kickback and a place to say your piece about the kickstarter" to "See the Early bird items, get a kickback deal and say your piece about the kickstarter".
And maybe changing:
The
bootcamp peeps can harvest $4000 per BRK plus $300 to $500 per youtube vid: (which has a lot of acronyms and weird words) into
Members of our
Wheaton Labs community can make $4000 every 100 days plus $300-$500 for making youtube videos. Join us here: