My Music about Permaculture

I posted this a while ago but I didn't put it in the right forum so here it is in music where it belongs.

So I'm a teacher and I showed my students few FVSS songs but they couldn't get past the music stylings (I'm dealing with kids here...) So, I wanted to take a stab at a different style of music that could reach a different audience. Let me know what you think this is sort of my essay on permaculture if you will - it is meant to be taken all as one thing so read the explanation of the lyrics if you will and let me know if I totally missed the ball on any main permaculture topic or if this might be more harmful than not (by making a misrepresentation.) My students LOVED it.

Ultimately I am just a musician and love making music and I made this for fun but figured I'd post it on youtube and show it to you guys as you might find it interesting.

Great job regarding expressing yourself through rap and your explanations seem to me to be right on.
Wonderful that you are getting a chance to share this with kids - planting seeds in their brains!