Hi you dont mention the vertical position of the tanks relative to the barn down spout level. I would do everything i could to plumb the water from the roof direct to the tanks. We call it here an inverted siphon, where the 4" down pipe is buried and then rises up to dump in the top of the tank . That means that you have to have clear outs on the buried parts as they will get crud building up in them, secondly i dont think the 1/2 horse pump has a snowballs chance of handling that much water especially as its only 55gal sump and in my view it would be better if you must stick with that system to put the spare redundant 1hp pumps on that end and let the 1/2 horse do the pressure side. I understand your wish not to have aerial pipes every where but buried systems in my view are not ideal . I have mine like that and i am considering shifting my tank so that i can go direct from the roof . and my tanks are 1, 25000 litre About 6,000 US Plastic tank and a approx 10,000 US gal Concrete one, so its a major. Once the water is in the tanks it is easy to plumb the pressure side to wherever you need it, Alkathene farm water piping is great and goes around curves as against the PVC drainage/ down spout pipe that has to be in strait lines with glued fitting at the corners.
Just my thoughts