Jen East

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Regarding the actual cover proposition currently being considered,...
As an Advertising & Graphic Design instructor, this is what I would suggest to one of my students in preliminary Critique session.

 *    Use of colors more interesting, earthy but still lively, and images/illustrations organized yet separate enough to be clear.
 *    However, comes off as more a probable kids' book rather than something which would appeal to adults looking to further their education and experience levels.
 *   Wonky ALL CAPS type font looks random and does not give ability to fine tune or highlight key concepts (So, for example, I would advise a graphic design student to consider either leaving out the throw-away connectors (the, to, by) or making them lower case.
 *   Then look at your text arrangement --- clusters and breaks --- and think about how your brain processes things.  So, putting your key concepts together on single lines is likely to be clearer and stronger:
    *                 SKIP
    *          Develop your
    *   SKills to Inherit Property
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    *        by Paul Wheaton
    *          & Mike Haasl
 *   Illustration, layout, etc. may fly as is otherwise, but would at least consider adding a little more perspective, not quite so flat/boxy/ primitive, a few more organic details, randomize & cluster some of the tree fruits --- and maybe make the tractor "face" a little less grumpy/menacing 🚜 😎

More than 2 cents here, but FWIW, and take what you like...
3 years ago
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Thanks for the lead, and for the review. I took some Permaculture workshops at Ecoversity in Santa Fe years ago, then spent years having to relocate regularly due to elder care situations. Now looking at getting back onto a piece of land other than a rental somewhere and starting over, so resources like this are much appreciated! I have always kept a few animals, but they all become family members, including the sheep and the llama (for spinning & weaving), and the heavy emphasis on "animal products" always made me uncomfortable --- plus I wondered if it was even possible to cultivate a Permaculture landscape without that.
9 years ago