I'm really new to all of this. I'm not sure if this kickstarter is for people who are already interested in permaculture (and/or gardening and homesteading), or for people already fairly educated about all of this. For someone completely new, trying to remember the acronyms of everything is a bit difficult, so you might want to use full names for the funding levels, if you are allowed enough characters for them.
I think you could get rid of $5 and $10 levels and put the rewards from those in with $15. But that's coming from someone who's never run a kickstarter! If you had a lot of people purchase those levels in the past, it may work better to keep them, though.
If you can work around with some of the formatting, I think it would be nice to put the bio for each instructor closer to their image (get rid of some white space), and move the extra space to after their description to break up the sections between instructors. Not a huge deal, but would be confusing for someone who looks away for a minute or two then tries to finish reading. Also an extra space before each new reward level.
As a previously employed proofreader, I think that some small words ("that" especially) can be deleted and some wording be moved around to make an overall shorter read, mainly through bios. Not sure if you can rewrite bios to make them shorter, but that seems to be the first/best place to do that. If you'd like me to give it a go, I'd be happy to.
I'm incredibly excited about this kickstarter. I'm about to go through OSU's Intro to Permaculture course in May, so am in education overload right now, but wouldn't blink at spending $30 - a cheap date night's price.
