The thing that jumps out is the slope (which I realize may not be accurately portrayed in the drawing) and the assumption that three diversions will be possible. There's a lot of
it depends here, both slope and the infiltration qualities of your soil, so take any advice as not an answer but an indication of what research to do. Grey water is going to enter your system episodically in small quantities--<1 to maybe 40 gallons--so depending on slope, distance and soil characteristics, it may often seep into the ground before getting to the first diversion. Look around the web and you'll see lots of plans for infiltration systems. Many involve pvc or other pipe to get the grey water to the area where you want it and to spread it across a greater area than it would naturally flow. It is important to understand that storage in a tank is limited to 24 hours to minimize bad bacteria growth.
General greywater info (stolen from
Oasis Design, a great resource):
Greywater.com—Lots of detailed greywater chemistry info
Greywater Guidelines-Sustainable Sources
Greywater wetland for 500 person university building. Since it also takes rainwater from the roof, the house is a net producer of clean water.
Wetpark - Permaculture greywater purification with a beautiful design
Graywater and rainwater use articles from University of Arizona
Living Wall - Plant growth and greywater purification in confined environments or frost-free areas
I'm in the foothills of the San Pedro Mountains in northern New Mexico--at 7600' with about 15" of precipitation, zone 4b historically--growing vegetables for the local farmer's market, working at season-extension, looking to use more permaculture techniques and join with other people around here to start and grow for farmers markets.