My 2 cents for recommendations for corrections and possible improvements.
Kickstarter page:
- The spiny images are very cool. Is it possible to get them to all spin in the same direction and at the same speed, so motion sickness doesn't occur for our intended audience?
- I have a lot of grammar and punctuation recommendations for the wordy bits, is there a way to send them in a word document for ease of making recommendation for corrections?
Video:
- The audio on the video is pretty good, Paul's voice at the end should be a little louder (raise the db) with a little more inflection/emotion.
- Visually to help focus the attention to Paul's question, it might be helpful if the video blurred or faded leaving only the animations at the end of the video.
Very respectfully,
Dan-O
