Sue Schweitzer

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On the "freeheat.info/free-heat-movie" page, under "Meet the instructors!":

These write-ups each have a few "grammar" issues, such as missing commas, etc. - - but besides that, the notable typos are as follows:

Sky Huddleston (note: is the name "Sky" or "Sjy"? Under the Liberator commercial heater it is spelled "Sjy".
is an experienced entrepreneur with a demonstrated history of working in the renewable energy industry and commercializing obscure technologies. Over a decade of combustion system engineering experience including the engineering of diesel engines, aircraft engines, and biomass combustion systems for residential and commercial applications. Extensive experience in mechanical engineering, drafting, and design. He is currently the CEO of Liberator Rocket Heaters, which has the worlds first and only rocket mass heater that is tested and certified to being compliant with UL-1482, ULC-S627, ATSM-E-1509 safety standards, and fully EPA certified.  (place an apostrophe in worlds)

J.R. Megee
is a turkey herding, pig wrangelin permaculture lovin handyman that people are crazy enough to give him money for, Rocket mass heater builder, and certified Garden Master. Was in the first permaculture design coarse at Wheaton Lab also has been through Geoff Lawton's online design coarse.  (change to 'course' )


On the "freeheat.info/free-heat-plans/" page:

Under the "Sauna Rocket Heater" - typos: "3D plans with step by step instructions for a rocket heater designed wto quickly warm small spaces like saunas or other structures." (change to 'to')

The following comment is just a thought and stems from my bad habit of editing and proofing numerous things for people.

Reading through each write-up and description, the grammar-ish things get me! ..haha.. Like not hyphenating "step-by-step" or "2-hour" and the like. SO - a suggestion would be to ensure that the way you write things is consistent throughout the entire website. SO, if you choose not to hyphenate "pebble style" - then don't hyphenate one and not the others. An example of this is at the bottom of the 'freeheat.info/free-heat-plans/": "FREE Pebble Style Rocket Mass Heater 3D Plans - Sign Up to our Newsletter at permies.com and get a free copy of the 3D plans detailing the Pebble-Style Rocket Mass Heater that is approachable for anyone from the novice to the seasoned RMH builder."  Note that one 'pebble style' is hyphenated, and the other is not.

PS - another suggestion would be to make a clickable link to anything you mention that has a .com (or similar) such as "permies.com" - - make it a link for a person to click straight into the website - but - make sure that when they click it opens a new window so as not to take them away from the freeheat.info site.

OK - enough from me. :)
On the "https://freeheat.info/free-heat-movie/" page -

Under "Lorena style rocket cooktop" - typos: "The rocket cooktop just got an upgrade! The Lorena design allows for the rocket falme to heat the pot directly."

Under "Sauna rocket heater" - typos: "Uncle Mud's cottage design has been adapted to the sauna at Wheaton Labs. Find out hoe to make a ver efficient rocket heather to sweat it out."

Under "The Liberator commercial heater" - typos: "The Liberator is a commercial rocket heater available in the USA, we tested it's capabilities alongside Sjy Huddleston, the creator of this contraption." (capitalize 'we' and take out the apostrophe in 'it's)

Under "Challenges with the 4 inch j tubes" - grammar: "We no longer use 4 inch j-tubes at Wheaton Labs, find out why and the reasons the 6 inch j-tubes is a far better option for us." (change 'is' to 'are')

:) Love this site!!!