I can't really tell how you proceeded from the pictures, nice as they are. did you put any of the comb you removed into their new hive?
my first cut out was also pretty amateur-ish. took three of us 12 hours. sort of a blind leading the blind situation. worked out well, though, and cutouts now provide a little bit of income for me. though free
bees are nice, now that you've done it once I would suggest charging for the service next time.