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When you fellow writer's, write books, how do you typically write them: straight through, as in chapter by chapter, or do you skip around, writing a chapter here, or a chapter there?

I have done both. A romantic fiction novel I wrote I did by going from start to finish, but believe it or not, on my memoir, I skipped around a lot as I wrote it. By that I mean I wrote the second to the last chapter, well before I did some at the beginning of the book. I also did that with my coffee table farming book, skipping around a lot as well. I have even had some short stories where I wrote the ending of the story first, and then later went and figured out a beginning to the book.
 
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Skipping all the way for me.
 
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I more or less write the first draft straight through, whether it be story or novel.  I say more or less, though, because sometimes when I have ideas about the story I will have written them down already, and I may paste them in when I've reached the appropriate place (or maybe I'll paste them in at the end of what I'm writing to act as a kind of destination guide).  But earlier out-of-sequence writing rarely (never?) gets used in its originally written form.
 
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Depends. If I'm writing a travelling journal, it's obviously chronological. Maybe I'll revise it at a later date to add things like map and photo references, etc.

However, when writing a technical report it's always 'skip' because it has time constraints and works best if the bones of the report exists. The skeleton also allows a format to be chosen and for thought-bubbles to be jotted down before they're overlook by the complexity of data.

I really enjoy the latter because it involves more creative thought. All the thought in the former is created by the experience when in the actual process of travelling.

 
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My brain doesn't work linearly. Imagine 10 different movies on the same player, but set on "shuffle".

I write whatever scene is playing in my head at the time. When I have enough scenes written, I'll put them in order. Eventually, the in-between scenes will reveal themselves.

That said, 99% of the stories I've written are still missing crucial scenes.
 
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Ellendra Nauriel wrote:My brain doesn't work linearly. Imagine 10 different movies on the same player, but set on "shuffle".

I write whatever scene is playing in my head at the time. When I have enough scenes written, I'll put them in order. Eventually, the in-between scenes will reveal themselves.

That said, 99% of the stories I've written are still missing crucial scenes.



I have some of that as well...and is kind of the reason I posted this question. If, 99% of your stories are missing crucial scenes though, that implies 99% are uncompleted books or stories...so is that effective writing? I am not being judgmental at all, because I am the same way, and have certain uncompleted stories and books myself.

I am just wondering if going from start to finish...even forcing myself to push through the areas I would like to skip...would be best?

If I was to give myself a writing "style" it would be a lot like the author Stephen Crane, who wrote the Red badge of Courage. In reading that a person will see he adds a lot of detail, but manages to do so without slowing the story down too much. It is a hard job to say the least. But because I do write like he did, I will often get to an area of my story that needs additional details, so I make a note to come back to it, but I have stories that are all done except these detailed areas.
 
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It is kind of funny too, but I came up with a pretty good story line, but I could not think of an ending to it. A few months ago, the ending came to me, but it was 22 years later!!

I keep all my stories and books on my computer, and have for years just because sometimes this does happen. A story I had never finished, suddenly has an ending, or a middle I was not sure about.

It is definitely a curse!
 
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