Hi Sam! Relax... you have come to the right place for advice on RMHs.
There is a separate thread for RMH in greenhouses. You should look over the entire thread as there are people with similar set ups. In fact my RMH is also in a greenhouse and the pipe is buried directly in the ground.
A 20' run is not too small. Are there any bends or 20' straight out to exhaust? As long as you dont have an unusual amount of bends an 8" system will be more than enough. Maybe too much? Hopefully someone with more experience can chime in...
Basically you want you burn tunnel, riser, and exhaust pipe to have the same
cross sectional area. Formulas are found online. Since you already have an 8" pipe to work with, figure out that CSA. Now make your burn tunnel and heat riser the same CSA as the pipe (It will be roughly 7"x7" square).
For example: My burn tunnel is a 7"x7" square tube that is 21" long. The heat riser is 7"x7" square tube that is 63" high.
The moderators of this forum have plans available for sale. They are at
webpage Scroll down and you will see them. I have not personally used their plans but many people have and only have good things to say. Might be an option to consider if you are having issues with "the book".
Most importantly is be patient. It is worth your time to do your homework especially if you are on a budget. The forums here at Permies are a perfect place for homework. There is a search function that is helpful for specific topics. Make many mock ups of your RMH with the bricks and do test burns (safely) before cementing things into place. This helps see things first hand before going all the way.