Larry Bock wrote:Travis, glad to hear that your tests came back negative for cancer, between this and your chainsaw, it seems to me,you have had a "busy" year. Early morning is prime writing time here. Once in a blue moon,you will see me put down my tools, walk over to my truck, write a few lines my hood and go back to work. Being in construction, I get razzed a bit. Lol. Literally have 11 note books in varied state. One thing I do have to do is pick up a decent " pad" and transcribe works I deem " finished" into.
Although there was a French writer who said,
" a poem is never finished,just abandoned". Take care. larry
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I'm presently about three quarters of the way through a 300,000 word anthology of short fiction, the 33rd Annual: The Year's Best Science Fiction. It has been eye opening to read the diversity of grammar that has come into play in people's writing. Although I took creative writing in high school, I do not have any background in writing beyond that. I have gained what little knowledge that I have up to this point primarily through reading a great deal from a diversity of authors in a diversity of genres, and trying as best I can to remember the basics as I put pen to paper or sit at the keyboard. I fail and flail and make up my own rules sometimes as might be noticed in my letter to the editor posted above.Glad I posted this, I need a good place to start posting some of the "'poorly written" things I write. Is there an online site or sites that anyone could suggest that are not too hard on" new folks"? I write things from common observations that most don't see to poetry. Every thing in between. Kinda thinking that some eyes other than mine should see some of the things I write. be nice to get some feed back. More than willing to listen to some constructive criticism. I do have a distinct style I've been told. Be nice to have some help honing what little skills I have lol. TNX. Larry
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Denise Kersting wrote:Hi Larry, for an easy (nonjudgemental) grammar check, while not perfect, you might want to try https://www.grammarly.com/. I believe they have a free version, but I do have a paid subscription with them for work purposes. Sometimes I think Word does a better job, and sometimes Grammarly. Sometimes, I try a sentence in both and see what they come up with!
Good morning to all. I have about 10 New Years resolutions for the next year. One of them is to try to find a friendly writing/poetry/ short story forum to join. If anyone has a suggestion, I'd appreciate it .
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Looking at life through the eyes of a tire hub
Eating seeds as a pastime activity
The toxicity of our city, of our city
New, what do you own the world?
How do you own disorder, disorder
Now, somewhere between the sacred silence, sacred silence and sleep
Somewhere between the sacred silence and sleep
Disorder, disorder, disorder
More wood for their fires, loud neighbours
Flashlight reveries caught in the headlights of a truck
Eating seeds as a pastime activity
The toxicity of our city, of our city
New, what do you own the world?
How do you own disorder, disorder
Now, somewhere between the sacred silence, sacred silence and sleep
Somewhere between the sacred silence and sleep
Disorder, disorder, disorder
New, what do you own the world?
How do you own disorder
Now, somewhere between the sacred silence, sacred silence and sleep
Somewhere between the sacred silence and sleep
Disorder, disorder, disorder
When I became the sun
I shone life into the man's hearts
When I became the sun
I shone life into the man's hearts
We can see why it is that Bob is putting out more of an effort to clearly get an idea into someone's head with imagery. There's a reason that he was given a noble prize for literature for his lyrics... but not all lyrics are created equal.[Verse 1]
How many roads must a man walk down
Before you call him a man?
Yes, and how many seas must a white dove sail
Before she sleeps in the sand?
Yes, and how many times must the cannonballs fly
Before they're forever banned?
The answer, my friend, is blowing in the wind
The answer is blowing in the wind
[Verse 2]
Yes, how many years can a mountain exist
Before it is washed to the sea?
Yes, and how many years can some people exist
Before they're allowed to be free?
Yes, and how many times can a man turn his head
And pretend that he just doesn't see?
The answer, my friend, is blowing in the wind
The answer is blowing in the wind
[Verse 3]
Yes, How many times must a man look up
Before he can see the sky?
Yes, and how many ears must one man have
Before he can hear people cry?
Yes, and how many deaths will it take till he knows
That too many people have died?
The answer, my friend, is blowing in the wind
The answer is blowing in the wind
"Never doubt that a small group of thoughtful, committed citizens can change the world; indeed, it's the only thing that ever has."-Margaret Mead "The only thing worse than being blind, is having sight but no vision."-Helen Keller
I write a little... on a website called Quotev. My user on there is Bristlebreeze, and my latest book is called A Hidden Destiny. Sound interesting? Check it out! Just go to Quotev, and search up Bristlebreeze in people.Larry Bock wrote:Anyone here write or more specifically? Anyone feel a need to write? when I was in high school, I was a less than perfect student. Additionally, no one could figure out why I would get an "A"'in English/Creative writing and not even show up for the classes I did not care for. Eventually, this led to being " placed" in an alternitive education program for the last year and a half
Decades and a lifetime sneak past. The last 18 months, I've chosen to eliminate TV from my life. Slowly, I started writing again. Now, I go nowhere without a composition book and a pen. Some writings start off with snippets or observations, some times abandoned for months, others will flow out on paper at a pretty quick pace. I note the date, time and give it a reference " title".
Somewhere along the line, this became pretty important to me from a lot of aspects . One being that once things are in ink, they need not rent space in my mind, the other, sometimes ( after many rewrites) I'm pretty happy with the final products. At times I approach a writing with a purpose. Ie. Cancer took my 20 year old daughters mother or could be just something little.
Wolf wolf wolf
Larry Bock wrote:Hello, probably should have posted a new thread but this seems like a good place. It's an observation/question. I really love music, perhaps because it's basically poetry with back ground. I listen intently to lyrics. If I'm not really sure of the words, I look up the song and make sure that I understood the wording. This, has almost become an every day occurance. I basically tone out the instrumentals and dive deeper into the words behind them. I enjoy doing this because many people love a song, but don't really know the lyrics. A few mistaken in a stanza can change the meaning of the entire song. Does anyone else here dissect ( horrible way of putting things) music? Ps, as I do this, I realize that there is vast improvement still to be done with my writing skill. How can a mere mortal compete with Jim Morrison. Lol
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Larry Bock wrote:Anyone here write or more specifically? Anyone feel a need to write? .... The last 18 months, I've chosen to eliminate TV from my life. Slowly, I started writing again. Now, I go nowhere without a composition book and a pen....
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