Rus Williams wrote:what is the tiny download exactly?
I just updated the page a bit. Is it clearer now?
Make it clear on the header that this is a live stream event OR video after the fact.
Is the after the fact video downloadable or stream only.
Better now?
App. tech course may be confusing, suggest change to appropriate technology
I was limited by kickstarter.
Make it super obvious which level of support people can get the downloaded video for the pdc.
Better now?
Suggest to start with a advert about what people will get (attractive) rather than talking about what you are doing (not as interesting)
For example
"This is your chance to follow along with one of the worlds best pdc and appropriate technology courses from the comfort of your own home! Learn from some of the best instructors in the business and help us to share permaculture with the world by investing in the technology we need. etc etc
Learn about hugels, swales, design thinking, appropriate land use etc etc
Excellent point. I put an "Executive Summary" at the top. Better?