posted 1 year ago
I'm not the polydough expert, but to me those pan loaves look the way mine get when the dough is a bit wet and overproofs (second rise is a little too long-- it gets way high and then falls during baking).
I've been baking for a jillion years and sometimes they overproof, and we eat 'em anyway! but you might want to try kneading in a bit more flour when you form the loaves, rising just until you see it's risen (not like leave it for 4 hours, like i occasionally do), and slicing it to get a nice ear.