Invasive plants are Earth's way of insisting we notice her medicines. Stephen Herrod Buhner
Everyone learns what works by learning what doesn't work. Stephen Herrod Buhner
I'm not the polydough expert, but to me those pan loaves look the way mine get when the dough is a bit wet and overproofs (second rise is a little too long-- it gets way high and then falls during baking).
I've been baking for a jillion years and sometimes they overproof, and we eat 'em anyway! but you might want to try kneading in a bit more flour when you form the loaves, rising just until you see it's risen (not like leave it for 4 hours, like i occasionally do), and slicing it to get a nice ear.
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