Anyone up for reviewing a permaculture design? No feedback since August

Hey all,

I enrolled in an online permaculture course (I know, I know, should've done one in person!) and I submitted my final PDC design back in August (5 months and waiting) and . . . long story short, never received any feedback or assessment despite following up multiple times. Receipt was confirmed, but that’s where it stopped.

I’d still greatly value some constructive PDC-level critique, so I’m wondering if anyone here (PDC graduates, designers, or experienced practitioners) would be willing to review my YouTube design presentation and provide honest feedback on what works, what doesn’t, and what could be improved.

If you’re open to helping, the link is below, and you are welcome to comment either here or on the video itself.



Thanks!

Sare

Sare:
WOW!
An awesome first post! Welcome to permies!!
That's a lovely, well thought out plan, beautifully organized, excellent graphics and lists. On a 1-10 scale you DEFINITELY get a 10!!

I don't know enough about your climate to be sure, but I'd question if your chickens will be too hot on the sunny side of the house in zone 10. That's the only thing I'd tag with a "consider this carefully" note, and it would NOT knock down your 10 out of 10 score.

Impressive, very well done, and I'd say you passed your class with flying colors!!

:D