As Thomas says, you have far too much horizontal duct and too many bends for this layout to work, and the metal K-tube will burn out probably in the first season of real use (most likely on the coldest day of winter).
Build a brick J-tube according to dimensions published in many places, and it will last for a number of years even if you don't get firebrick but use old red brick. Use firebrick in the core and it will probably outlast you.
Instead of the original RMH duct-in-mass design, build a stratification chamber or "bell" - just a hollow brick/cob/masonry box with the J-tube feeding into it and the exit from the bottom of the box to the chimney. This will have almost zero friction and work fine. For sizing the box, there are
tables of batch box capacity, and J-tubes can be sized relative to those. I have found that an 8" J-tube requires about the same ISA (internal surface area) as a 6" batch box; a 6" J-tube would probably match with a 4 1/2" batch box more or less (around 30-35 sq. ft.).
I have also found that, with a well-drafting chimney, an 8" J-tube runs fine with a 6" chimney. If you are not certain of your draft, better to be sure and build a 6" J-tube.