Portable rocket cooking stoves like the one you built are a very different animal from
rocket mass heaters like what we talk about most here. The small rocket stoves will never get as hot as a
rocket mass heater combustion core, so the metal will not deteriorate as fast. They will also not get as efficient as an
RMH can, but they can still be much more efficient than a campfire or firepit.
The vertical leg of the fuel feed as you show it is not going to work well, because air can be drawn in the lower opening and the fire can burn up in the vertical fuel feed instead of being drawn strongly into the core. I think you will get much better results if you either eliminate the vertical feed and just use the horizontal feed (with the divider shelf as Gerry mentioned for a separate air supply), or block off the lower opening and feed all the fuel and air through the vertical feed tube. The lower opening would only be for cleaning
ash after a fire.
The riser as shown is on the short side, but with free air movement it may work well
enough once proper draft is established. The way the grate is sitting directly on top of the riser, though, when a pot is sitting on it, the airflow will be almost cut off and you will not get a good fire. The grate needs legs an inch or so longer so there is space for flames to flow all around the pot.