Graham, i'm sorry to say, but this is not a rocket. You're cooling the combustion gases too early.
Without insulation, you won't go anywhere, as well as dry stacking bricks. Well, you can dry stack, if you have insulation outside, which prevents air leaks.
What is your goal ? Just cooking ?
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In my idea, you really need to make at least one real working J tube and batch, or several, before starting experimenting, and calling sub par results; deviating from the usual builds; a "rocket stove" I know this is not that nice to hear. But, a rocket stove has worked for thousands of others, why wouldn't it work for you? I can cook a steak, few taters, or sausages, with two handful of sticks, in my J tube. And the heat riser is even made out of insulated metal.
So, it doesn't take much to make a working cooking rocket stove.
I cooked again yesterday night on my workshop heater (well it heats the whole building. 635 M3 ) It took 20 minutes before it was up to temp for cooking, and took a little crate of offcuts. 40cm x 30cm x20 cm. or so.
Keep at it, and you'll have a result.
But remember, to be a proper rocket, it has to have at the very least an insulated chimney. be leak proof. And you don't rob the combustion energy. Except on a batch, where you can get away with the top of firebox plate.
Your latest attempt, i will not even comment.
But on this one.
You don't have a door. Normal that your cooking plate doesn't get hot. You have cool gases being forced underneath.
The port for the primary air has to be at the bottom.
As Peter stated before, your opening at the back of the riser is too small. If you want to boil that kettle, raise it two three inches above the riser, with anything which doesn't impede with the gas flow.
And if possible, skirt it. Remember, no restriction from the CSA (cross sectional area of the heat riser) If you have a 90° turn, increase your gap by 1.5 times the right figure to keep the CSA.
Go and dig some earth in the back of your garden, screen it, and wet it to make mud. It's all it takes to stick the bricks together. It's infinitely reusable and cleanable. Find yourself a piece of batt insulation, at least. To wrap that heat riser.
If you put your griddle over the heat riser, it will work better, faster, because of the big surface to extract heat from the gases. In any heat exchanger, it's either mater of surface, or time.
I think, stick to that batch, you will have better results.
HTH.
Max.