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Victoria Jankowski wrote:October what at 2 pm for early bird? It's a # on the poster still
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Charlie Tioli wrote:
Beau Davidson wrote:Do you all see a difference between this page:
https://www.kickstarter.com/projects/paulwheaton/2091792217?ref=7rwbk0&token=855bfdf1
and this page:
https://www.kickstarter.com/projects/paulwheaton/garden-master
The first link states that it is a draft and it has comprehensive information about the program. The second does not state that it is a draft and it contains no further information other than a title image.
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Most master gardener courses offer extensive botanical and cultivation information. Which is great! But they also teach that you must use all the bottles and sprayers of gick with the warning labels, which is not so great - for the gardener or the garden.
There has never been a course taught through an ecological lens . . . Until now.
In the Garden Master Course, we have taken the very best of the Advanced Master Gardener curriculum and improved upon it. At the same time, we have employed biological and ecosystemic methods to eliminate the need for conventional and certified organic pesticides and herbicides. Commercial gardening for the future!
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Beau Davidson wrote:I made some tweaks to the first couple paragraphs of "The Story."
Any edits or suggestions? This needs to be the grippiest bit of text - clear, concise and compelling.
Most master gardener courses offer extensive botanical and cultivation information. Which is great! But they also teach that you must use all the bottles and sprayers of gick with the warning labels, which is not so great - for the gardener or the garden.
There has never been a course taught through an ecological lens . . . Until now.
In the Garden Master Course, we have taken the very best of the Advanced Master Gardener curriculum and improved upon it. At the same time, we have employed biological and ecosystemic methods to eliminate the need for conventional and certified organic pesticides and herbicides. Commercial gardening for the future!
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Devoured by giant spiders without benefit of legal counsel isn't called "justice" where I come from!
-Amazon Women On The Moon
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Dc Stewart wrote:In the preview video, I was stumped by the moments when the characters' arms grew to improbable length. [/i].
paul wheaton wrote:
Dc Stewart wrote:In the preview video, I was stumped by the moments when the characters' arms grew to improbable length. [/i].
Good catch! Andres?
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paul wheaton wrote:latest video notes:
1:05 can we show cold climate food forests?
1:08 hmmmm maybe split the screen to show one side with apple and rhubarb, and the other side with fig and avacado. I don't think helen did tropical.
1:49 need some sound balancing
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Andrés Bernal wrote:
paul wheaton wrote:
Dc Stewart wrote:In the preview video, I was stumped by the moments when the characters' arms grew to improbable length. [/i].
Good catch! Andres?
The character is rigged and has proportional limbs :) the thing is you’re younger self is sitting on a tiny chair hence your legs go up, your arms hang and you look like even more like a giant! I can tweak it but the joke would be lost.
Thanks for pointing it out Stewart!
paul wheaton wrote:
Andrés Bernal wrote:
paul wheaton wrote:
Dc Stewart wrote:In the preview video, I was stumped by the moments when the characters' arms grew to improbable length. [/i].
Good catch! Andres?
The character is rigged and has proportional limbs :) the thing is you’re younger self is sitting on a tiny chair hence your legs go up, your arms hang and you look like even more like a giant! I can tweak it but the joke would be lost.
Thanks for pointing it out Stewart!
I thought i looked fine and the issue was helen's arm.
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Finally! An Online Garden Master Course for permies!
How Permies.com Works
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You should never forget that every creature has its purpose in the cycle of nature and can also be very important to humans. Sepp Holzer's Permaculture
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Donna Lynn wrote:
Beau Davidson wrote:I made some tweaks to the first couple paragraphs of "The Story."
Any edits or suggestions? This needs to be the grippiest bit of text - clear, concise and compelling.
Most master gardener courses offer extensive botanical and cultivation information. Which is great! But they also teach that you must use all the bottles and sprayers of gick with the warning labels, which is not so great - for the gardener or the garden.
There has never been a course taught through an ecological lens . . . Until now.
In the Garden Master Course, we have taken the very best of the Advanced Master Gardener curriculum and improved upon it. At the same time, we have employed biological and ecosystemic methods to eliminate the need for conventional and certified organic pesticides and herbicides. Commercial gardening for the future!
Beau, I'd lose the last sentence. It might dissuade those who have no interest in commercial gardening but might be interested in learning the techniques in this course for personal or homestead use. Or you could just say "Gardening for the future!" However if the course happens to be mostly geared toward commercial farming then leave it as is.
And this one is just my personal preference, but I'd write the prior sentence "At the same time, we have employed biological and ecosystemic methods to eliminate the need for conventional (or even certified organic) pesticides and herbicides." Might prevent a few double-takes like I did when I read the original.
Meld your first two sentences into one: "Most Master Gardener courses offer extensive botanical and cultivation information, which is great!"
You could say "...all the bottles and sprayers of gick covered with warning labels..."
Most master gardener courses offer extensive botanical and cultivation information, which is great! But they also teach that you must use all the bottles and sprayers of nasty stuff with the covered with warning labels, which is not so great - for the gardener or the garden.
There has never been a course taught through an ecological lens . . .
. . . Until now.
In the Garden Master Course, we have taken the very best of the Advanced Master Gardener curriculum and improved upon it. At the same time, we have employed biological and ecosystemic methods to eliminate the need for conventional (or even certified organic) pesticides and herbicides. Gardening for the future!
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Beau Davidson wrote:
The Story now begins:
Most master gardener courses offer extensive botanical and cultivation information, which is great! But they also teach that you must use all the bottles and sprayers of nasty stuff with the covered with warning labels, which is not so great - for the gardener or the garden.
There has never been a course taught through an ecological lens . . .
. . . Until now.
In the Garden Master Course, we have taken the very best of the Advanced Master Gardener curriculum and improved upon it. At the same time, we have employed biological and ecosystemic methods to eliminate the need for conventional (or even certified organic) pesticides and herbicides. Gardening for the future!
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Donna Lynn wrote:
Beau Davidson wrote:
The Story now begins:
Most master gardener courses offer extensive botanical and cultivation information, which is great! But they also teach that you must use all the bottles and sprayers of nasty stuff with the covered with warning labels, which is not so great - for the gardener or the garden.
There has never been a course taught through an ecological lens . . .
. . . Until now.
In the Garden Master Course, we have taken the very best of the Advanced Master Gardener curriculum and improved upon it. At the same time, we have employed biological and ecosystemic methods to eliminate the need for conventional (or even certified organic) pesticides and herbicides. Gardening for the future!
Oops! Forgot to delete the extra words in red!
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I brought this back from the farm where they grow the tiny ads:
Gear Review Grid
https://permies.com/wiki/gear-reviews
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